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Teen Poetry #6

Moon poem

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

0 posted 2003-07-28 10:59 PM

you can never change the moon
to be like sun.
she can never be as bright
& as glaring.
she can never be as bold & cruel.
no,
the moon can never be the sun.

you can never see the moon
when it is day.
she is around somewhere,
in the crowded sky
but the sun outshines with
her harsh rays.
she's just watching, waiting,
bidding her time 'till the sun
grows tired
& retreats to her realms
then she can shine.....

but not as brightly as sun,
she can never be that.
she just radiates;
illuminates when nightime comes,
with a smile that
shows pain and happiness-
as well as you know faith.

and you wonder why secrets
are kept hidden during day.
revealed when daylight fades.
the moon can never be like sun,
but for some,
she is so much more.....

***

* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me using the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

1 posted 2003-07-28 11:02 PM

ey, havent posted for a super long tym i dnt even recognize some pips here anymore!!! =).anyway hope ya all like this comeback poem ive written

* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me using the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-07-29 12:43 PM

ha ha, i too love the moon. the sun sucks. good write.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-07-29 12:46 PM

This was really spiritual for me. I loved it. Thank you for the read.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

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