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More than you will ever know
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Song_for_Serenity Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 97USA |
Ahhh! Writer's block. I haven't really produced anything that I'm totally satisfied with for a while now. I think this will be the last poem that I post here. No worries, I'll still read all of your guys' stuff, but I don't think I'll be posting any more poems. It was fun while it lasted. Anyhoo, I hope you enjoy! Stealing glances of you Hoping you can’t see All of this emotion Deep inside of me Awaiting the night Wanting you to love me too I’ll look to the heavens Wishing for you I’m starting to love you More than you will ever know I’ve found my happily ever after You’re my Prince decked in charms Nothing feels more right Than being here in your arms Admiring everything about you You’re funny, sweet, and kind I feel a sort of serenity Knowing you’re all mine I’m loving you More than you will ever know There may be some trouble Through the coming years But the joy that we share Will overshadow the tears Not until we fell in love Did I know dreams came true I’m enjoying every moment Spending forever with you And I’ll always love you ~Angela |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Why can't he know? I loved this. And thats weird for me, because I don't like love poems. But this was good. The guy I like..told me that he cares for me "more than I can say, and more then you will ever know." I've been confused since then...I want to know. The title drew me to this.. I enjoyed. ~Lex  |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
and the quote reviels how you really feel. if youre going to stop writing because youre in love, then best wishes. just hold on. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
The title was what attracted me to this poem. I like it lots, great work! ~Jess  PS- I'm sorry to hear you're leaving!!!  "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Grr..you evil woman! Your not going anywhere dammit!! hehehe...hey sweet heart, I really enjoyed this, the flow was off in a few places but I'm sure that's probably atrributed to the whole writer's block thing(and I feel you there!!) but I really really like this, I don't know..the honesty of it I guess...and I loved a line in there about the years to come, I'm glad your looking toward a future with him and I hope you two last a very long time(if not indefinitly, but not said to freak you out!)Anyways I'll probably talk to you later and convince you to keep posting cause I love reading your stuff! ~Live and Laugh~ The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again |
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kj Junior Member
since 2003-07-28
Posts 15Australia |
just tell him! this is a beautiful poem, keep writting! writers block goes away in the end just keep writing it doesn't matter if you're satisfied with it or not cause you don't have to show it to anyone |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
Ohhhh, I always read your work, but I never get the chance to reply! I can't believe that you're leaving.  Yours is some of my favorite in Teen Poetry. If you truly ARE leaving...know that your work be missed dearly by me. I thoroughly enjoyed this one, and to echo everyone else, you should tell 'em. For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, |
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chicken Junior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 44 |
gr8 read/write, its obvious from this poem that writers block does go away so keep writin if this is anything to go by i think you have definetely got talent! =*) |
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Song_for_Serenity Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 97USA |
Awww.. you guys rock. No worries, it's not like I'm leaving the site forever, I just won't be posting poems. I might get back into it later, but for right now, I'm not really wanting to put writing up. Besides, I'll still be reading all of your guys' stuff. Thank you all for the kind replies. I heart you!  ~Angela |
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