there`s a thin line beetween love and hate

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Teen Poetry #6

there`s a thin line beetween love and hate

chicken
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since 2003-07-27

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0 posted 2003-07-28 07:38 AM

I loved you so much
I hated you.

Star T
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since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

1 posted 2003-07-28 08:46 AM

those two lines say exactly how love feels sometimes..a lot of times.u could add a few lines though to add even more beauty to the piece.

SilentTears
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

2 posted 2003-07-28 11:50 AM

I agree with Star on this one...most definitely.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-07-28 12:11 PM

While this does describe how love can be sometimes, I agree that it would probably be better if you added a few lines to elaborate on what you have already said.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

dertah
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since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

4 posted 2003-07-28 02:28 PM

this person has seen the light!!!! preach on preacher.

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28

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California

5 posted 2003-07-28 03:27 PM

LOL!! great. True.
~Lex

Riley

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since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

6 posted 2003-07-28 06:00 PM

short, and sweet!

riley

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

OtherSideOfTheMirror
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since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

7 posted 2003-07-28 06:52 PM

well this was true but... kind of funny. not like ha-ha...just weird... so true and yet so simple it seems it should have smacked ya in the face.

so yeah, you're poem just smacked me in the face.

~cassi

anawnda
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since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

8 posted 2003-07-28 11:42 PM

remind me of the song that goes....."i hate you but i love you, i cant stop thinking og you...im stuck on you" i can so relate!!!!=)

* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me using the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher

kj
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since 2003-07-28

Posts 15
Australia

9 posted 2003-07-29 04:06 AM

powerful short but very powerful

chicken
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 44

10 posted 2003-07-29 07:26 AM

thanx for all your comments!

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