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Teen Poetry #6

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Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2003-07-24 02:21 AM

Old cobwebs being resurfaced,
They've been dusty for to long.
Webs being sewn together again
Im no longer in love.
No longer the angel of virginity,
Im just a black spider resewing the web,
Trying to make the pieces fit,
Into the jigsaw puzzle.

I'm just kickin it up

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

1 posted 2003-07-24 08:29 AM

i liked ur short poem.it was kind of sad though.."i'm no longer inlove" that line touched me.and i know the feeling hurts real bad.hold on my friend...and keep ur heart open.

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

2 posted 2003-07-24 10:48 AM

Short...but indeed sad. I'm sorry.

The future isn't now, that was yesterday.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-07-24 01:29 PM

ha ha, sometimes short and sweet is the way to go. good write.

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

4 posted 2003-07-25 01:16 AM

I like the reference of starting over and how it no longer seemed to matter. The spiders were a great way to get this message across... little black spiders seem to know no boundries.

NJS

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