Teen Poetry #6 |
Just wrote this... |
peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
I wrote this a few minutes ago and I haven't come up with a title yet. Tell me what ya think and give me a few suggestions for the title if at all possible! Thanks...! My hearts sighs of desperation, Only pleading for some sort of inspiration. I look into the dark night, Searching for a faded light. Nothing is sought, Why did I even give it a thought? Unable to find what I'm looking for, Endless tears, my eyes start to pour. Believe, Tomorrow is a new day, What will it pay? More stinging pain, Inner strength, I must gain. "If I could give you one gift it would be my eyes...So you could see how it feels to be me looking at you." -Unknown |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Since this is so forward and creative, it has beauty. Maybe "(The) Color(s) of Black and White." |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
This was good. I liked it alot. Sorry, though...I can't think of a good title for this. LOL. I'm not much of a help. Love ya! ~J.Lynn "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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