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Roadkill Pretty
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Roadkill Pretty |
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collarbone_girl Junior Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 45Wonderland |
Roadkill pretty girls Fashion victims gone wrong Run over by the make up train Pass out and wake up All you see False eyelashes and cigarette burns Not the kinda pretty girl You see in magazines Not the kinda pretty girl That dances in your dreams Black leather ballet shoes Guitar burnt fingertips and Sleepless black eyes Makes for the perfect Roadkill pretty kinda girl That haunts you in your dreams Looks like a car wreck You know you just gotta look Eyeliner scars and blood drenched lips Roadkill pretty kinda girl (edited by moderator) [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-18-2003 11:10 PM).] |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
woah that was amazingly good. I can feel the anger. This is an intense piece of art. I love your style. I found the end a little unessacary. but overall loved it. ~Lex..  |
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Rise of Truth Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 59Beneath the Fury Sun |
Alluring. In a tragic sense. "Our child is in your hands |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
wow, thats it, this was amazing, thats all i have to say. i love it, love it, i am adding this to my library, this is simply amazing~ *the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time* |
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Peeps-Peter Junior Member
since 2003-07-19
Posts 14 |
It was well written, it was very effective. unique...I loved it. ~Peeps |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
i really liked that... i like the style a lot. i wish i'd gotten to read the end tho... oh well |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
very well written ... i like the idea of the poem nicely wrote CaSSandra* |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
hmmmmm |
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