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Dayna_Sorrow
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since 2003-07-13
Posts 4


0 posted 2003-07-13 05:42 PM



This is one of my first poems.


It's to long to wait for the day
to come.
It's to long to wait for it to bay
and be over with and done.
It's to long to wait to cry the tears
that I've been holding deep within.
It's to long to wait for all those fears
to pass over me.
It's to long to wait for my Angel to come
and take me to a better place.
It's to long to wait for the screams to pass
and the fire to stop.
But I can wait for you to come home
safe from the war.


My cousin is over seas. So this is for him.

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Rise of Truth
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since 2003-07-12
Posts 59
Beneath the Fury Sun
1 posted 2003-07-14 05:01 AM


War.
War never changes. Neither doth it's victims...
Does your cousin know about this? Believe me, the little things help ease long deployments.

I am the prophet
Harbinger of what you fear the most
Your enemy of belligerent honesty
Destroyer of your livelihood, built on falsehood

sixington
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since 2003-07-14
Posts 53
Utah
2 posted 2003-07-14 01:40 PM


wow.
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