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Teen Poetry #6

Shades of nothingness

Paragon
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 114

0 posted 2003-07-04 06:30 PM

Colorless
Odorless
Tasteless
they are there
untraceable
in the light
in the darkness
yet they remain
you breathe them
you taste them
you feel them
every moment
yet you are ignorant
shades of nothingness
pervade
evade
invade
our senses
they convince
us they don't
exist

Song_for_Serenity
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

1 posted 2003-07-05 01:41 AM

Hey there! Great poem. Great style. I really liked it. Have a spiffy day.

~Angela
"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..."

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-07-05 02:28 AM

I just..wow, I really like this! It's so simple and about nothing really(literally hah!) but it just has the perfect rythm to it and..I don't know just..yeah kinda like that! Enjoyable read
~Live and Laugh~

I believe that junk food tastes so good becuase it's bad for you..I believe your parents did the best job they knew how to do..I believe in Karma what

[This message has been edited by *Belabebeautiful* (07-05-2003 02:31 AM).]

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-07-05 06:04 PM

very nicely done, cherreo.

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