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Escape The Day |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Stomach in knots- From things I thought were true. But I knew that all along I was wrong. LIES! So I hide behind My disguise! You walk in the sun, But I prefer the shade. I can’t believe what you’ve done, Or how I was so betrayed. No I’m not okay Want to escape the day Away from the pain That’s driving me insane!!! It killings me inside That’s why I hide I hide the shame In the darkness my life became. LIES! So I hide behind My disguise! You walk in the sun, But I prefer the shade. I can’t believe what you’ve done, Or how I was so betrayed….. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Wow Stac...I really like this one. "You walk in the sun, But I prefer the shade." Favorite line through-out the whole poem. But very nice...I definitely felt this one. Great job. Love's. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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Alnilam Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75 |
LIES! So I hide behind My disguise! the greatest lines to surmise something i can never express. thank u for speaking my heart. great read. |
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Song_for_Serenity Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 97USA |
Great write. The flow and style were both very magnetic. I liked this a lot. Have a spiffy day! ~Angela |
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