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Teen Poetry #6

I Have Bled Rivers

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Junior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 43

0 posted 2003-07-01 01:05 AM

-Short, but I have nothing else to say in it.

I have bled rivers
necessary streams of pain
they have opened my eyes
only now can I truly love

... and appreciate

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-07-01 01:09 AM

short is good when it says all you want it to

and this is great

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-07-01 01:46 AM

It's good enough for me!

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

3 posted 2003-07-01 10:50 AM

Short and sweet! I like this one, good work! ~Jess

"If I could give you one gift it would be my eyes...So you could see how it feels to be me looking at you." -Unknown

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2003-07-02 08:55 PM

dude, this is too true... awesome job

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

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