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PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

0 posted 2003-06-30 11:56 PM

I'm the one who's so far away,
searching for meaning
every which way.

Yes, I'm the one who's so far away,
can you feel the pain
surging my viens?

Why am I so far away
from the peace
I feel must so seek?

Am I the one so far away
from the way I seek
so I truly truly
understand?

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (07-01-2003 12:02 AM).]

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-07-01 12:23 PM

Short, but I really liked this one, especially the 2nd stanza.
Glad to see you posting here again.
Well done, thanks for sharing.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-07-01 01:05 AM

what you are seeking, will find you...let it come

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-07-01 04:36 PM

nice write, i like the flow very much...

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2003-07-01 05:17 PM

Wow...i havent been here in sooo long and im so happy to have u be my first read

You're still your amazing old self

Glad that hasnt changed!!
Liked the poem lotsss..maybe your closer to what your looking for then you think.

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

5 posted 2003-08-06 08:37 PM

great write.

~bjw~

~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2003-08-07 12:44 PM

You know, I'm beginning to wonder if we ever really find what we're looking for. *hugs* I know this reply isn't really intelligent, but it's been an interesting week.

Be well my friend

*Linalu*

It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

7 posted 2003-08-09 12:33 PM

Great Writing Titus

Andy

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

8 posted 2003-08-11 03:20 PM

Thank you, everyone.

~Titus

The few. The proud. The Marines.

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