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PrincessNets
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0 posted 2003-06-27 09:11 PM


Confusion fills my mind
As I sort through
Other people’s comments and
My own feelings.
I don’t know what to think
When people say you like me.
It seems too good to be true,
That someone like you,
Could have feelings for
Someone like me.
I look at facts and here-say,
Which tells me it could be true.
I can’t break down my wall
And believe it just yet,
Because everytime I do,
I end up picking up the pieces of
My broken heart and
I can’t believe that it won’t happen again.
Although confusion overwhelms me,
I see what is happening
And I realize that I could get hurt,
But I open my heart to you anyway.

I am a hopeless romantic not because I am hopelessly in love and not because love is hopeless.  I am a hopeless romantic because I do not see the hop

© Copyright 2003 Jeanette Gabriele - All Rights Reserved
morgansmiles
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since 2003-06-11
Posts 25
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1 posted 2003-06-28 01:17 PM


HEY! Great Poem.....who is it about? Frodo? lol....i miss you jeanette! Hope you have a great summer! Byeses!

If you arent happy, then just laugh...people wont know why and the look on thier faces is sure to make you happy!

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2 posted 2003-06-28 07:55 PM


Hey, great poem... I hope that everything works out for you

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

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