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SimpleDiscourse
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2003-06-23 10:18 PM

I want to be your muse,
I want to evoke beautiful verses from the back of your heart,
I want you to think of me and have to grab a pen and paper,
I want to inflict pain on you,
In the bittersweet way that lets me know,
That you care just as much for me as I care for you.
Because I look back through old notebooks,
And I realize that you are littered throughout,
In the binding,
In the margins,
In the lines,
Even the blankest of pages.

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

1 posted 2003-06-24 09:24 AM

This really struck a chord with me. I enjoyed it a lot. I thought the idea was creative and unique, amd you brought it to life beautifully. For some reason, I really liked this line:

I want you to think of me and have to grab a pen and paper.

Excellent job - I'll look for more of your work.
~Kay

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-06-24 12:31 PM

*sigh*

I think you live my life. ~.~

Another beautiful poem.

-Lioness

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

3 posted 2003-06-24 05:30 PM

GREAT poem! I can relate...so very much. You described it so perfectly...I could never do it so well. Good job hun.

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2003-06-24 05:33 PM

WoW, I REALLY like this, especially the last 4 lines. Great job.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2003-06-24 10:39 PM

This...was an amazing poem!
I just love every line in here, they're all perfect and in just the right place.
Good imagery too.

Beautiful.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

6 posted 2003-06-25 08:48 AM

:The sound of utter speechlessness:

I have forever toyed with the concept of muses, but I think you pretty much summed up what i've been trying to say for so long..wow.

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

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