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nobody
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since 2003-05-19
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0 posted 2003-06-23 03:35 PM


some people write about life or death
whats the point,theyre the facts of our existance
some just it in hospital,collecting sadness
when they could get the joy of the people they love
a girl lies in a darkened room,holding the knife to her wrist
all because she feels her lifes gone to waste
the tramp begging on the street,tryin to keep alive
food is the biggest worry of their existence
an old woman lies dying,having lived her life to the full
but it was a waste and she nos it
she waits for her chariot to come,to take her up hi
but nothing comes,and as her soul dies
she retreats into the blackness of death
to join everyone else in their clouded illusions
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