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Truth #2

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

0 posted 2003-06-19 12:23 PM

Truth...
A word so important,
I have it tattooed on my back.
The words seldom spoken,
But I remain steadfast.
The most important word in the english language,
If you can't be true to yourself and others,
Then why do you exist?

There are sad Truths...
"Life got to hard, so I had to quit.
Forgive me,
Love Sarah"
"I'm sorry but she won't make it through the night."

And there are Truths of a kinder kind...
"I love you."
"Your test came back negative for HIV."

Truth can come in forms most frightful,
And in forms that part the clouds to show a sunny day.

[This message has been edited by Darkness (06-19-2003 12:24 PM).]

newguy04
Junior Member

since 2003-04-23

Posts 17
ohio

1 posted 2003-06-30 11:44 AM

To put the words of a friend to use "nice" This poem was great. I liked it becasue it was honeset. plus i like it because the tatoo is sweet

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-06-30 12:00 PM

Excellent poem, I like the way you started it.
Thanks for sharing.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

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