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LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2003-06-19 11:37 AM


this is nothing personal or anything, i just felt like writing it.
i sit here
watching you die
watching you scream
watching you cry
i cant move a muscle
im frozen with fear
the end of your life
is more than near
you what you did
you killed three others
i son, a daughter
and a mother
it was your fault
drinking all that beer
you were so drunk
you couldnt steer
so take this message
dont drink and drive
for when you do
your stealing lives

~suicide is not so much the wish to die as it is the fear of living~

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wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
Posts 215
yakima wa
1 posted 2003-06-19 02:09 PM


good write. First one that I have read of yours and I liked it.

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

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