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Teen Poetry #6

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LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2003-06-17 04:38 PM

Look into my eyes
Maybe then you'll see
Theres nothing but lonliness
Theres no hope for me
I cry in Pain
I cry in sorrow
All im hoping for
Is no tomorrow
I've forgotten how to smile
I've forgotten how to live
Im dissapointed in this life
And i'll never forgive
Cuz no one cares
And no one loves me
Im alone in this world
And i've always been
Im searching for love
Im searching for a friend
Someone i can trust
Until the end

kadafi09
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

1 posted 2003-06-17 06:45 PM

i could feel the emotion of your poem. you truly conveyed your feelings. i could feel a tear roll down my eyes as i read.

LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

2 posted 2003-06-17 08:15 PM

kadafi09, thanx for the reply. im glad that i could reach out to you.

*Dark Princess*
Junior Member

since 2003-04-13

Posts 22
lost in the shadows

3 posted 2003-06-18 02:57 AM

This was great...Its what I'm feelin right now...All I have right now that is keeping me going is the hope of moving...But remeber there is always someone who loves u even when you dont think there is...Princess

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