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Teen Poetry #6

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gorJess
Junior Member

since 2003-03-24

Posts 15
new zealand

0 posted 2003-06-17 05:29 AM

it takes thousands of snow flakes 2 make the ground white,
it takes billions of stars 2 make the night sky lite,
it took 1 kiss 2 make me like u, and 1 poem 2 say goodbye

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Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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1 posted 2003-06-17 10:06 AM

Ouch! Should have known you'd end it with a little surprise.....

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topsyturveychick
Member

since 2003-01-19

Posts 57
Bris,QLD,Aus

2 posted 2003-06-17 09:45 PM

Ouch was my exact reactions aswell. I litterally gritted my teeth and made the sound when I read the last line of ur poem. I would have to say that this is the most powerful poem that I have read...that is so short. It really makes u think before u start a relationship and also at the comparisons of life.

kadafi09
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

3 posted 2003-06-17 09:48 PM

a very powerful poem, it really made me think of all the relationships i've been in, you did beautifully in writing it

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