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It All Comes Out |
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Manth88 Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 45IL, USA |
Why can't I have you Is it because the way I look Or is it because the way I act Did I do something to upset you I know I am not like the other girls Pretty tempting and sweet But lord get over yourself, you deserve me You know deep down were meant to be But can't you see you mean everything to me This is how I feel Everytime I see you, my knees get weak Then I lose my breath, and begin to weap I feel like I am not good enough for you But then I ask myself, do I have to be If im not good enough then why do you acknowledge me When you want something you throw yourself at me I feel like I am being used I didn't ask for this, why is this happening to me Wait I know why, it has to be because he is more popular than me. |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
Great job, don't give up writing and you'll get better and better, nice write. ~*~*brezee*~*~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Guys are impossible to understand....lol Nice write, you'll only get better the more you do  Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Ooops, meant to say:Welcome to Passions :bouncing: Enjoy your stay in the blue pages Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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morgansmiles Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 25hicksville |
hey! Great Write! I feel like this too....dont give up! Be happy, and if that doesnt work then just laugh! People wont have a clue why you are laughing and im sure the look on thier faces will be make you h |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
good write! boys are stupid, you need to tell him tho! keep writin' and TELL HIM! lol |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Hey there honey!! This was a good write, the emotions were expressed well and I could feel your frusteration and hurt all the way over here!! And I agree with jaysh too..boys ARE STUPID!!! I have several venting poems on that subject! Anyways I hope you see clearer skys up ahead and remember that here in these blue pages your always welcome! ~Live and Laugh~ Don't look to me for perfection, for I will surely let you down. |
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jamesgrls New Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 1 |
great job sam its mander your really getin your fellings out nad thats good expessually about kenny hes not worth it girl well bye bye now but great job and keep writin mander |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hey there! Great post! This poem was simplistic, but conveyed the proper emotions that you wanted to get out. The scheme was also rather interesting! We all can relate to what you're writing about here, and that is what makes poetry true art. The world is good, and nothing bad ever happens! |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Welcome to pip, this is a very good first post, I can really relate to it, and, even though I'll never do it, you really should tell him. ~*~Karen~*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Wow..this reminds me of a movie I watched the other day. Popularity is DEFINETLY not all it's cracked up to be. The sad thing is most people aren't mature enough to realize that until they graduate, if they ever do. It sucks, it really sucks. The best thing, and the only thing you can do is start working on YOU and what you think instead of everyone else. The more self-confidence you have, the more socially magnetic you will become And then, you'll realize all those "popular" people are lame anyway. Trust me, I went through the same thing. Don't waste you time on a guy if for even just a second in time he makes you feel inferior to him. He's not worth it Keep your head up sweetie!XoXo's ~ Kiley **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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