Teen Poetry #6 |
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nomadd New Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 1 |
her hair, so soft, so smooth oh how i wish i could drown within its strands to have it overflowing over me like grains of sand her mouth, so soft, so perfect it's contours so beautiful, so well drawn as pretty as a springs dawn following a blizzards snow oh how i wish they were over me but i can only see your smile, which breaks down even the coldest of men light radiating from it, it is my religion, my zen i realize i am but a visitor i bask in her beauty but still i can feel the meter running out on our time i do not care, she will always be in front of my line but for now i'll just get to the back of hers |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Welcome to Passions I think this is an excellent piece to enter with, very sensuous and silky. Thanks for sharing and I hope you will continue to do so Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Welcome aboard, new kid....It's like that sometimes, isn't it, you're just willing to stand in any line, and do it no matter who cuts in front of you....but then, sometimes she'll take a stroll down the line and pull you out of it -- I found my perfect mate in exactly that way: she chose me, of all people.... A nice first post, this....oh, and check your E-mail... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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