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At the Gate
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At the Gate |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il 
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At the Gate There's a place where angles fly. A place where children no longer cry. A place of love and of hope. A place unlike I've ever known. There's a place above the clouds. The place I know your spirits found. A place where you know no harm and are safe inside Gods loving arms. This is the place where I long to be. At heavens gate that's where you'll meet me. M.P.D Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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Toasty Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 74my little hole in wisconsin |
wow... to put it simply, this is beautiful. Good job!Please continue writing, you have a knack for it.  Keep up the good work!~toasty "Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very beautiful poem, and I enjoyed reading it. I especially liked this ending....... know no harm and are safe inside Gods loving arms. This is the place where I long to be. At heavens gate that's where you'll meet me. Thanks for sharing it with us.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I have a feeling that for you the elevator will definitely be going up.... Good work here, well constructed and well written too. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Very beautiful thoughts expressed very effectively Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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