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Is it enough?
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Is it enough? |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
Is it enough to scratch the surface can you truly know what loves worth is from a mere kiss, or must one delve deep giving all of our heart and soul to keep Is it enough to give you all of me leaving me hollow and empty or must I make myself anew to write more sonnets to you Is it enough for us to be so soon resigned believing to be love as society has defined or must we break all of the conventional rules searching for love, sifting sands to find a jewel |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
l've never felt like this, but... it hit close to home, for different reasons. luv unreturnd, or not acknowledged in the way it deserves, by anyone, is hard. harder than hard, really, but you've written about it in a way l'm not sure l could if l was in luv with anyone... anyway, l liked this, paragon... sometimes l feel the exact same way. laurie. well done, btw. |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
ooo. i like this poem a lot. keep up the great work. i'll be keeping an eye out for more of ur work. much love, akie. I am proof that the heart is a risky fuel to burn. |
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