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Paragon
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since 2003-02-16
Posts 114


0 posted 2003-06-12 11:23 PM



Is it enough to scratch the surface
can you truly know what loves worth is
from a mere kiss, or must one delve deep
giving all of our heart and soul to keep

Is it enough to give you all of me
leaving me hollow and empty
or must I make myself anew
to write more sonnets to you

Is it enough for us to be so soon resigned
believing to be love as society has defined
or must we break all of the conventional rules
searching for love, sifting sands to find a jewel

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laurie
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since 2003-05-28
Posts 153
canada, ontario
1 posted 2003-06-13 12:25 PM


l've never felt like this, but... it hit close to home, for different reasons.
luv unreturnd, or not acknowledged in the way it deserves, by anyone, is hard. harder than hard, really, but you've written about it in a way l'm not sure l could if l was in luv with anyone...
anyway, l liked this, paragon... sometimes l feel the exact same way.
laurie. well done, btw.

infinite disaster
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 69
Illinois
2 posted 2003-06-13 04:12 AM


ooo. i like this poem a lot. keep up the great work. i'll be keeping an eye out for more of ur work.
much love, akie.

I am proof that the heart is a risky fuel to burn.

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