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Teen Poetry #6

No Race

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-07-11 07:59 PM

I stair into space
nothing ness fills my mind
my destination loneliness
my hart has nothing to find

I’ve spent my time with and without
the love of someone
for the first time
I find myself with no one

sitting with depression seeping in
my mind no longer wants to deal
now my being is filled
with something so real

so I escape away
my mind and body become two
the actions that I take
I no longer think through

I’m now floating
out in space
and going back to my body?
there is no race

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

Alnilam
Member

since 2003-07-04

Posts 75

1 posted 2003-07-11 08:03 PM

good...very good...i can relate but could never write about it. i liked it alot.

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-07-12 08:04 PM

this was well done. I loved the fourth stanza. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and talent.
~Lex

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