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The Promise |
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LegalSecret69 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69Virginia |
Whenever you are scared, I'm always here for you. Whenever you are feeling lost, I'll help you make it through. I promise.... Whenever you are feeling alone, and don't know where to go. I will always be waiting for you, rain, shine, or snow. I promise.... Whenever the road gets rough, and you can't take it anymore. Don't give up on yourself, I'll always have an open door. I promise.... Whenever you are feeling hurt, and you get a broken heart. I'll help you through the bad times, that'll never break us apart. I pomise.... I am your guardian angel, and I'll never let you down. Whenever you are feeling low, I'll lift you off the ground. I love you, I promise.... |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
Its a really really nice poem-for friends or a certain person? It would be a great poem for friends to show that you care but for a boyfriend/girlfriend it would really show them what your all about and that you will never ever let them down-till death do us part-really plays its words in this one. |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
hey i reall like this one. to bad i cant write. i wish i was able to write happy stuff....but right now it is all dark and depressed. i miss being happy.... i forget what it is like. i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Very beautiful poem, every word is in just the right place. Well done! WinterWren |
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