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Teen Poetry #6

Window To My Soul

LegalSecret69
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 69
Virginia

0 posted 2003-06-06 06:51 PM

That was a great antic you pulled,
but it didn't pull me.
I'm still stadning where I'm at,
full of my own animosity.
The pane of glass,
it shines clearly to my soul,
you can see that I am hurting,
and this is a painful kind of cold.
I try and refrain,
from the hate and the pain,
but I'm sick of always losing
in lifes little game.
I feel everyone's force,
pull water from my eyes.
These are tears of fear,
and my soul is where it lies.
If to my heart,
you had a fitting key,
you would soon realize,
that my heart secretly bleeds.

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

1 posted 2003-06-06 07:08 PM

so much emotion and feelings. i dont know where to start. i feel so much like this. it hits super close to home. i think i would like to talk to you. email me at [email protected]
ill be waiting for it. im looking for more. later.

i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me.

a deer in lifes headlites
Junior Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 23

2 posted 2003-06-06 07:41 PM

I liked it and it just got better as i read farther. I'll be looking for more.

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