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spritrider87
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since 2003-05-31
Posts 294
NH

0 posted 2003-06-04 06:35 PM



Tell me when my world changed
From happiness and laughter
To depression and acute anger
From being surrounded by friends
To being alone
From never fearing anything
To constantly afraid
From being a child to being an adult
From loving my family
To hating every one around me
Tell me when my world changed
And made everything seem so bad
Maybe I let my guard down
Or maybe it was destroyed
Time to put on another face
And another act
Time to build my walls once again
No one is allowed in
And feelings not allowed out
Tell me when my world changed

i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me.

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2003-06-05 07:51 AM


This is good hun, like I already told you...
Don't think too much about when the changes took place, try focus on changing things back to happiness.....and we're right here to help you do that
Luv, Liz xxx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
2 posted 2003-06-05 11:35 AM


Oooooooooo! This was another great write I read from you today. Your not alone in the world, others know exactly how you feel. Writing poetry is a great way to get your emotions out when you feel as if you have no one to talk to. Can't wait to hear more from you! ~Jess

"If a thing is worth doing at all, it is worth doing badly." -Gustav Holst

LegalSecret69
Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69
Virginia
3 posted 2003-06-06 07:52 PM


hey. This poem was really good....  I know exactly how you feel. We seem to have alot in common.  Poety is a good way to express your feelings.... keep writting.  "Secret"
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