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Tell Me When |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
Tell me when my world changed From happiness and laughter To depression and acute anger From being surrounded by friends To being alone From never fearing anything To constantly afraid From being a child to being an adult From loving my family To hating every one around me Tell me when my world changed And made everything seem so bad Maybe I let my guard down Or maybe it was destroyed Time to put on another face And another act Time to build my walls once again No one is allowed in And feelings not allowed out Tell me when my world changed i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is good hun, like I already told you... Don't think too much about when the changes took place, try focus on changing things back to happiness.....and we're right here to help you do that  Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Oooooooooo! This was another great write I read from you today. Your not alone in the world, others know exactly how you feel. Writing poetry is a great way to get your emotions out when you feel as if you have no one to talk to. Can't wait to hear more from you! ~Jess  "If a thing is worth doing at all, it is worth doing badly." -Gustav Holst |
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LegalSecret69 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69Virginia |
hey. This poem was really good.... I know exactly how you feel. We seem to have alot in common. Poety is a good way to express your feelings.... keep writting. "Secret" |
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