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SCREAMIN
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0 posted 2003-06-04 05:42 PM



the rain dont stop
and it wont stop
not for me
not for you
it keeps goin
nothing will cease the endless line of torment
i feel the tiny raindrops
i feel the big raindrops
and the rain dont stop
and it wont stop
not for me
not for you
it keeps goin
it dont care bout nobody
not me
not you
not anyone
it keeps coming on strong
crashin its thunder
flashin its lightning
and the rain dont stop
and it wont stop
not for me
not for you
it keeps goin
dont get caught in the rain
dont let it catch you
dont fall into its grasp
cause it wont never let you go
and the rain dont stop
and the rain wont stop
not for me
not for you
it keeps goin
so get out of its way
cause the rain aint stoppin

But soft, what light through yonder window break. It is the east, and Juliet is the sun...

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1 posted 2003-06-05 11:20 PM


...but....I LOVE the rain....sometimes it's good to let it wash you clean....sometimes it's really good, that you can't get out of it's way (enjoyed this )
LegalSecret69
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since 2003-06-04
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2 posted 2003-06-06 06:23 PM


I like this poem alot.....the rain is one of my favorite things... I also love the rain. Keep up the good work!  "Secret"
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