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Teen Poetry #6

Understanding

xxshadowxx
Junior Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 43
Texas

0 posted 2003-06-02 07:05 PM

Unable to understand,
Where do I belgong, where do I stand?
I look around and see a vast sea of faces.
Do they know where they belong do they know their
places
Why cant I figure it out?
Some times it gets me so angry I want to shout.
Maybe I'm not suposed to know where I belong.
Maybe I knew it all along.
Searching for the question I already knew.
That I belong with you.
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If any one doesnt understand the last part that says "you" Im talking about God.

"Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me"

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-06-05 11:30 PM

well when you let us know it's about God, I think that makes the poem...absolutely....what a wonderful message! I love it. It took it from being "romantic" to being inspirational, and that rocks!

I'm so glad I read this tonight

xxshadowxx
Junior Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 43
Texas

2 posted 2003-06-06 05:30 PM

Hey thanks alot... that means alot to me...

*~Carrie~*

"Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me"

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