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the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2003-06-03 09:44 AM

centered in confusion we find ourselves lacking
lacking the courage to move on to take the stand
the one that we stood by so long ago
when we were the brave when we were the strong

crafted by dillusion blindly we walk
running into the walls of life not learning
from the mistakes that we made just yesterday
without reason or rhyme we beat ourselves up,
kill our own spirits and find the man in the mirror to be someone we no longer know.

who then will come alive will we take down another
sometimes the strength we need comes from the weakness that we so desperatly hold onto,
sometimes the thing that blinds us is that we just refuse to open our eyes. That which keeps us silent is the tongue that we hold in fear.

Another hour passes and we're still stagnent playing the high school games when school has been over for years now. centered in confusion, crafted by dillusion let the blind mute see and speak.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-06-05 11:36 PM

"sometimes the thing that blinds us is that we just refuse to open our eyes"

such a cool way of saying that... makes me wish I came up with it

great job!

lingering thoughts
Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

2 posted 2003-06-06 08:05 PM

Oooh I really like how you put it into words :
That which keeps us silent is the tongue that we hold in fear.

Good job *****

*Cassandra

a deer in lifes headlites
Junior Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 23

3 posted 2003-06-06 08:09 PM

It's great and it's also very true. I'll be looking for others from you.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2003-06-08 04:42 AM

my jimmy oh how i've missed you! hehe guess what that pic is still in my wallet it reminds me to pray for you everyday! email me sometime let me know how you are doing hun.
love ya!
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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