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lingering thoughts
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

0 posted 2003-06-02 07:10 PM

held sacred in the family
so many personalities
gathered as one
the harsh and cricked
easily fooled
each rise on thier own
insignificant differences
separate each belonging
it will be passed on to many
slowly changing by each bearer
as the memory dies of each
the next will change the meaning
when will this everchanging circle end

Hey ! this one probably isnt easily related or understood to many! haha!But tell me what you think..or what it might mean to you thanks for reading !

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-06-05 11:32 PM

dunno really...it could be so many things, each different to each reader...for me it was family antiques and things of that nature....

[This message has been edited by SEA (06-05-2003 11:33 PM).]

lingering thoughts
Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

2 posted 2003-06-06 02:11 AM

yay! i didnt think anyone was goin to reply to this one lol well im glad u did haha yeah i guess it will mean something different to every reader

*Cassandra

laurie
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since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

3 posted 2003-06-06 02:39 AM

yeah... antiques, something handed down with every generation, and slowly gathering the personality traits of each owner, until you can practically feel it radiating the energy or something...
laurie...
sorry, didn't mean to ramble. my minds asleep. nice.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2003-06-06 08:15 PM

hey I like this. I'm not sure what it is, I'm thinking something more personal than an antique, but I do like the poem

a deer in lifes headlites
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since 2003-06-04

Posts 23

5 posted 2003-06-06 09:21 PM

im thinking maybe about a person, but thats just me. I do like it though it makes you think.

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
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6 posted 2003-06-07 12:20 PM

No I can't say as I relate to it, but it is a very well written poem.
I can't really say why but I really love it!
Welcome to pip by the way!!!!

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

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