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lingering thoughts
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 70
Illinois, USA
0 posted 2003-06-02 12:06 PM

I wrote this some time ago,it was the first poem I had written for a long time... so reply and tell me what you think !

It seemed like how it used to be
but so many things had changed
I lye beside him, breathing ever so slowly
to smell the faint cologne
left lingering on his body
not knowing what to say
not knowing what to think
just holding each other
Silently...
in the darkness we would wait...
© Copyright 2003 Cassandra - All Rights Reserved
xxshadowxx
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 43
Texas
1 posted 2003-06-02 07:22 PM

Nice poem.
It was good.
       ~~Carrie~~

"Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me"
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