Teen Poetry #6 |
Alison's Issues |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Blame mistakenly thrown in every direction untill she realizes she cannot not blame herself for some of the problems caused by choices she has made in her life and she dabs her brush in more red paint draws some lines on the wall illustrating all the lies she's caused, insinuation in a paper bag as she attempts to choke herself with oxygen never realizing that maybe if she just inhaled everything would be okay again. Mistaken views from inside the barrel of the water bin she drowns not realizing she should just stand up and maybe the demons she creates would all just vanish right before her vary mishapen, miscalculated eyes as she paints the blood red polish onto her nails, owns every color but still refuses to change, change her life she'd rather struggle through it than learn how to survive. She uses them and throws them away like the tissues she uses to wipe her problems away and she cannot discard people like that, no matter what she thinks she cannot pawn people off like that it just doesn't work that way and she will never find happiness if the only direction she looks is down. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
my goodness, do you have any idea, just how fantastic this is??? WOW... seriously, this is an awesome write..... [This message has been edited by SEA (06-05-2003 11:26 PM).] |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Okay, that's it. This is the second one of yours I've read today, and I'm now officially adding you to my library. Wonderful writing... -Lioness |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Allysa.... beautifully done. I truly enjoyed it |
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