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Untitled, but it rhymes, and that is neat!
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Untitled, but it rhymes, and that is neat! |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
Your mind began to wonder, you thought about me Your heart had changed, your feelings all set free Thoughts of “us” danced through your mind To you I was, awesome, loving, and kind Your answer to “us” was found in sorrow We could not last another day, till the rise of tomorrow Your heart cried out that it could never be No longer were you happy when you thought of you and me When the time was upon us, and my heart left You had stolen my emotion with your unkindly theft Sitting there alone I wished just to know Would I be left in the past, as the girlfriend long ago Your heart went out to me, and friends we remained Our old friendship forgotten, never once again attained The thought of how you once did feel, lingered through the days Was the person you once saw me as all a distant haze? I didn’t want to be like everyone, I didn’t want to be the same I wanted you to remember, the friends we once became To ease my burdened heart, only you could stop the pain To know that I was special, and in your heart I’ll always remain With reminiscing visions flashing through your head You realized all I’ve done for you, all the tears that I had shed With these thoughts in mind, you set your emotions straight You realized in your heart, that I am someone truly great All I ever wanted, was to know that in your mind I was still a truly awesome girl, the only one of my kind Your friendship means more to me then you could ever know Promise you’ll hold on, and never let me go! **It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not** |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Aww...I really like this just as it is  Beautifully expressed and yup, the rhyming is neat Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
I can really relate to this one ... my ex had broke up with me and it hurt so bad but we are friends to this day and i have so much love for him even though we have had a rough past! thanks for the poem ! *Cassandra |
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