Let me decorate myself for you

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Teen Poetry #6

Let me decorate myself for you

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

0 posted 2003-05-29 04:37 PM

Let me decorate myself for you
Become a fountain of my lifeforce
Spinning, leaving circles.

Let me perfect myself for you
Forming pools of flawless red
Like warped and angry stars.

Let me complete myself for you
Leave just a dried-out husk
So you can say goodbye.

I'm not dead, OK? I'm just a little electroencephalographically challenged!

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2003-05-29 05:26 PM

WoWiE, I liked this. Totally. Great job.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2003-06-03 12:49 PM

To change yourself for someone else prevents you from a world of happiness you could experience otherwise.

The format of this poem was awesome. It reads easily and it expresses what it needs to in a short, concise way.

I like this... Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

"You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life)

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