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~*BayBee*~ Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 65In The Clouds... |
I tried to remember the times that we had. The laughs and the tears, the good times and bad. I still wonder if we could ever be, Just thinking about those times, just you and me. I have moved on from the pain that you caused, All through the hurt, my heart was lost. Now that I found it, I'm with a new guy. He treats me better and never makes me cry. It seems like its all a dream, because after you, I didn't think I could breathe. I am finally happy but I still remember the times we had. The laughs and the tears, the good times and bad. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
It's a good idea to remember your past as long as you don't let it overtake your present and future. I am glad you're happy with a new boyfriend. Nice work Baybee!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Always try to remember your past but just remember the good times, try to forget those awfull tears and the hurt he caused you, be able to look back on him with a smile...just my 2 cents! Nicely done well shown emotions. ~Live and Laugh~ Always strive for excellence never perfection. |
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AlostHeart Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 78Wisconsin, U.S. |
Be happy With your new dude!  ~Tori Louise~ Dont ever love a guy that will never love you back, no matter how hard you try. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
What a feeling, finding someone who finally treats you the way you deserve to be treated! Enjoy it with all your heart. You're more than deserving. Wonderful work  I enjoyed the read.--Marie "You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life) |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
nice riley leanne *the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time* |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
*sigh* That reminds me of a guy I dated last Summer... probably the only guy I ever truly believe I fell in love with. I completely adored him. And he treated me pretty bad, but I loved him so it didn't matter... right... And even though I've dated nice guys since then, perhaps I'll never be able to completely let him go. Anyway, nice job on expressing all that... -Lioness |
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