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SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

0 posted 2003-05-24 05:32 PM

Insensitivity overtakes you
Not even a glance in my direction
Not wanting to show your weakness
The pain you have so generously bestowed upon me
The stinging heartache that you have caused
I can't even begin to understand how your derranged mind works
This difficulty causes anger from within me to erupt
But on top of it all
There is a pleasing sweetness that I feel
Knowing that even though you don't display it on the outside
Inside your heart is black
And you feel a straining weight of guilt
You feel so much pain for what you've done to me
And I am content with that
Content with knowing that your dying inside
But the unfortunate reality is
I'm dying inside as well
And nothing will put an end to my pain

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

1 posted 2003-05-25 11:57 AM

I have nothing to critique... that was just awesome.

And I don't reply to stuff I don't like (unless I see something I can fix about it).

I know how bad that feels... you did wonderfully on expressing it.

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

2 posted 2003-05-26 01:33 AM

ok yeah this is great and i hope everything gets better for you.

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

3 posted 2003-05-26 05:35 PM

Meggles..this was really really good! Great job..and guess what?! I'm printing it out...hehe! ~Jess

"What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly."

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

4 posted 2003-05-26 06:12 PM

Big hugs to you!!!! if you wanna chat gimme a shout [email protected]

Dont ever love a guy that will never love you back, no matter how hard you try.

A.L
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 131

5 posted 2003-05-27 03:25 AM

oh i have written so many poems about how you feel...and i can relate so much but you put it in such good words... its so clear on how you feel and i feel the EXACT same way...yor happy that he is hurting even though he doesnt show it, but its hard to be happy when your hurting as well...i hope you get through this and i hope that something will come along and put a stop to your pain as well as mine...

-Ali-

A.L
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 131

6 posted 2003-05-27 03:26 AM

oops. forgot to put it in my library

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