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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land 
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The wings sink, Pearling, Steaming, Hermetic Fear. Sealed passion, Blinded with mock, Growing ire across the upland As the mercury rises, Enlightened or aware, please spare me that stare |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
So I don't get this poem but it sounds good. Maybe I'm not supposed to get it...? But it does sound good. I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This was cryptic, but that made it more interesting. What is it about? Or do you want us to guess?  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
lol, this certainly caused me to wake from my near-apathetic lethargy upon reading it! It's great, even if i still don't understand it... 0.o;; always here with you. Now stay and hold my hand and together we'll go somewhere new. ~Rich~ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"Enlightened or aware, please spare me that stare" *nods* --Marie "You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life) |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
lol... thank you all for your sweet replies! sorry i couldn't reply before, my computer is very silly and ignores all my pleas for reasonnableness...(is it spelled like that?) well on the basic level : hermetic ->suppressed emotions of ire -> anger etc etc... hope that helped... love, Claire xx "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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