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Teen Poetry #6

Satisfaction in Secrecy

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2003-05-17 09:55 PM

This is written for the one I love..Enjoy.

Midnight has fallen,
Wishes break;
My wintry one...

Beautiful star.

I sense a change in misery.
Devotion stays enfolded,
Soft,
Within my growing fears.

I will dwindle,
Somehow.

And only you can catch me...
You.
I think I have faltered,
Slipping.

I am one.

Away, away;
Holding onto nothingness.
Finding love,
I am dropping slowly into love,
Hidden in those eyes.

I can't even see
You.
Who are you who steals my heart,
Slight.
Apathy drifts beyond the clouds

Mingling in twilit terror.

Who is it...
What is this, which lulls me,
Breaks me apart
Wordlessly.

I know one name,
Spoken as delicately as the crystalline moon.
Utter it
Hear me whisper to the dark;
I know who causes me to tremble.

Shhhh...

It is you.

[This message has been edited by IndigoEve (05-17-2003 09:56 PM).]

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

1 posted 2003-05-17 11:30 PM

Aw I like this poem a lot... it gives me that silent moonlight fairy tale feeling...

"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives"

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

2 posted 2003-05-17 11:32 PM

This is really sweet! I love the way this was done!

Always remember to forget
The friends that proved untrue.
But never forget to remember
Those who have stuck by you.
-Anon

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