Element Haikus Part One: Earth

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Element Haikus Part One: Earth

FlyingCloud
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since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

0 posted 2003-05-15 07:12 PM

Life has always started with the Earth. Beautiful and dangerous, it is the jewel of life. But I digress. I've decided to write a series of haikus based on each of the elements: Earth, Fire, Water, and Wind.
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Shimmering small dot,
In the vast, bleak, black expanse,
Envied by great gods.

Loving mother, life,
Worth more than all the bright stars,
Sustaining people.

Surface is more plain,
But it is ethereal,
To those that see it.

^~^If we cannot live so as to be happy, let us least live so as to deserve it.~*~
Immanuel Hermann Fichte

[This message has been edited by FlyingCloud (05-15-2003 07:13 PM).]

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

1 posted 2003-05-28 11:21 AM

This also deserves a bump... I can't believe this sunk with not even one reply. Wonderful work... the way you captured the nature aspect of a haiku was awesome.

Very nice job...

Thanks for the read

--Marie

"You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life)

AlostHeart
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since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

2 posted 2003-05-28 12:12 PM

Good Job nice write.... Keeper up there!
~Tori Louise~

Dont ever love a guy that will never love you back, no matter how hard you try.

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