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Without A Doubt
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Without A Doubt |
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SCREAMIN Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 51US, Tx |
i sit alone on the moonlit sea the velvet sky watches over me reflective waters splash beneath my feet the beach sinks where the sand and waters meet your final words echo in my head i still cant believe what you said my heart is heavy and my mind is numb as the crickets begin their chilling hum i sit so still as the waters churn i watch intensely as my world burns the waters are silent, murky, and deep willows bend twist and weep but i have hope all is not lost name the price i'll pay the cost i sit alone on the moonlit sea the velvet sky watches over me reflective waters splash beneath my feet the shoreline sinks where the sand and waters meet i wish i could be with you again maybe this time we'll survive throughout the end though hope is frail i'll never run out it's you im waiting for, without a doubt |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
 This is incredibly sweet! Nice job! +Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+ |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Wowwie!! This one had great imagery, I absolutely love it! Yep, another one for my library. Hehe! ~Jess  "What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly." |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
YESSS! NICE job! I have nothing to critique you on... that was just amazing. -Lioness *growl* |
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