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Albino_Jenn
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since 2003-03-03
Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-05-11 12:49 PM



With past in mind
I see the way we used to be
We talked about our lives
The problems others couldn’t see
It was a kind of friendship
Where lies were never told
Many secrets revealed
For the other to hold

With present in mind
I see the way we are
How we’ve changed so much
We’ve come so far
But this distance traveled
Was in a different direction
Our friendships changed
We’ve lost our connection

With friendship in mind
I want back what we had
No awkward tension
Or reasons to be sad
If that means not dating
Then take it back
‘Cause I’d do anything
To get our friendship on track

With future in mind
I hope for the past
Friends like we were
Friends sure to last
To have you there
Means so much to me
Who I really am
You could always see

**It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not**

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FlyingCloud
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since 2003-04-28
Posts 151
A little place inside my head
1 posted 2003-05-11 12:53 PM


I've had a few loose friends that have moved away over the years and we lost touch. This poem made me think about them. I think that it can use a little more rhyming though.
Good job!

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

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