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DEAR MY SWEETEST ADDICTION,
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DEAR MY SWEETEST ADDICTION, |
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Tabitha LeAnn Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 50Kansas, USA |
DEAR MY SWEETEST ADDICTION, YOUR FILLING MY LIFE WITH NOTHING BUT FICTION. PUTTING IMAGINARY THOUGHTS IN MY HEAD, AND TO GIVE TO YOU THOSE STRANGERS IN MY BED. YOU'VE CURSED MY TONGUE WITH UNTRUTHFUL LUST, AND STOLEN AWAY EVERY PERSON I COULD ONCE TRUST. YOU TAKE FROM ME MORE THAN I RECIEVE, YET WHEN I'M WITHOUT YOU MY WHOLE BODY GRIEVES. YOU'VE CAUSED ME TEARS, ALTHOUGH IN RETURN YOU TAKE AWAY MY FEARS. YOU MOVE MY SOUL IN AN UNEXPLAINABLE WAY, AND I SIN FOR THANKING GOD FOR YOU EVERYDAY. SO TO YOU MY SWEETEST ADDICTION JUST ANSWER ME THIS!!! WITHOUT YOU WILL I BE ABLE TO SAY THAT ALL THIS I REALLY DO MISS?? |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
This was REALLY good. I can relate to it so much, it's amazing. Keep writing! Don't be scared to post anything, you're good! Great job! ~Jess  PS~ This is going into my library!  "What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly." |
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sean_krazy Junior Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 33 |
everyone in this forum writes real good poetry. i feel kinda out of place...  good write btw... sean (sean_krazy) |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
VERY good poem! I love this one!! It's going in my library, Excellent job! WinterWren |
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