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vashthestampede New Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 9 |
Our feelings come from above carried across trembling hearts in silence. My sweetest heart, this dearest girl must decline from this alliance in this world there is more than a person searching for the answers but these things seem broken when I'm away from you. Anything that stops my dreams from coming true must cease to be... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is one of my very favorites of yours!! I am SO proud of you!  |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
This is SUCH a beautiful poem! I was going to put my favorite part in my reply...but the whole thing is my favorite! This is so beautiful! Awesome write! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
 This is great! I love the simplicity of this poem! +Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This is a beauty...a wonder ~wranx |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful - and I agree that if anything gets in the way of your dreams - stomp on it! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very beautiful!! Never let go of your dreams! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vashthestampede, A wonderful write, enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The knit of the DNA is showing... this is wonderful, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
so proud of you? I couldn't wait for the "cookies" to set... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to PiP indeed - Step up and make your dreams come true... Very nicely penned, vash...  |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
rad poem i really loved it! robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
very well said and written  welcome |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 WONDERFUL! Welcome to Passions.Don't let anything keep you from your dreams. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very glad to read of such vibrant determination...hold on to it! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very strong-willed writing on display here...and done with excellence. Nice work!  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Okay...so I missed this when you first posted it, but I'm really glad that I've found it today. "Anything that stops my dreams from coming true must cease to be..." Words to live by... Love this write, and I hope to see more from you. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Toasty Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 74my little hole in wisconsin |
wow...what a poem.what a way to make a point! nothing should ever get in the way of dreams excellent... simply excellent.~toasty "Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales. |
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collarbone_girl Junior Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 45Wonderland |
"My sweetest heart, this dearest girl must decline from this alliance in this world there is more than a person searching for the answers" this poem is the perfection of happy melancholy. a big pat on the back! this cool noght air is curious... |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
This is the second of your poems that I've read and I love both of them, nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
what do we have but dreams? you expressed how important dreams are to us very well. and for that i thank you i was beginning to forget. keep up the great work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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