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sean_krazy
Junior Member

since 2002-09-14

Posts 33

0 posted 2003-05-10 12:51 PM

Morning Bell

Smashed last night,
With the morning bell I came around.
Stumbling across the door with certainty,
Only to find the empty bell replaced by
The faint echo of outer zephyr.
The star glimmered hope beneath grey clouds,
The morning bell frustrated me.

Inside I ran to Him for answers,
My hands clasped like a gem,
I closed my eyes and prayed.
He gave me
Liquor to commemorate good times,
Yet I wanted so much more.
These restless times through
Endless roads,
Hear you me, I’m a friendless ghost,
Where’s my companion?

Through my prayers,
With the morning bell I came around.
Deserted with tear drops in my eyes,
I clutched my palm against Him.
Stumbling across the window only to find
Hope shattered again.
The morning bell echoed,
I’m Death to remember,
May Angels lead her in…

sean

hey guys im back and got more poems at mah disposal.  lol...well hope u guys liked this one...

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

1 posted 2003-05-13 12:02 PM

I'm enjoying the way its written. I especially liked the part

"These restless times through
Endless roads,
Hear you me, I’m a friendless ghost,
Where’s my companion?"

Very interesting. I find the whole poem to be a work of art. Thanks so much for sharing... and yes I will be looking for more of your work.

oh and btw... welcome back

-Erica-

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2003-05-16 10:45 AM

Morning Bell...great Radiohead song.

You've done the title justice...it definitely isn't what I was expecting. Very nice work here...

~Carly

empty arms
and half a soul to go
-el sol
--Zwan

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

3 posted 2003-05-16 06:03 PM

I like the way this poem was done.

^~^If we cannot live so as to be happy, let us least live so as to deserve it.~*~
Immanuel Hermann Fichte

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2003-05-16 06:46 PM

I liked this a lot. Good write.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (05-16-2003 06:50 PM).]

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

5 posted 2003-05-17 02:08 AM

Wow! How come I haven't seen any of your stuff before? I'm sure I would have remembered it! Very well done I like the flow of this and the casendance of words, beautiful.
~Live and Laugh~

Always strive for excellence never perfection.
~Bella~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2003-05-18 01:00 PM

Sean~
This is an excellent piece of writing.
You are quite the talented poet and I'll
be watching for more from you.
Very well done!
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

xxshadowxx
Junior Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 43
Texas

7 posted 2003-05-18 01:39 PM

good job i like this one
Carrie

"Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me"

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