Teen Poetry #6 |
GO AHEAD |
Tabitha LeAnn Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 50Kansas, USA |
GO AHEAD AND TEAR ME APART CONTINUE TO CAUSE THIS ABUSE UPON MY HEART GO AHEAD AND MAKE ME CRY GO ON MAKING ME WANT TO DIE CONTINUE TO GIVE ME REGRETS GO ON MAKING YOUR SILENT THREATS GO AHEAD AND REMIND ME OF THE REASONS I SHOULD LEAVE GO AHEAD AND WARN ME IF I DO WE BOTH WILL GREAVE CONTINUE TO TELL ME ALL WE HAVE IS IN MY HEAD GO AHEAD AND LEAVE ME WONDERING IF WELL BE TOGETHER BEFORE IM DEAD |
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Barbara Junior Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 32 |
oh.... thats a very good poem.. its like pushing someone to tell you something bad, so you can go... |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Well you seem to be in pain, I hope it all goes your way |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
This is really good. I think there are a couple spots where the timing is off, but other than that it's really good! Jen To hate you must first have loved. |
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