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Teen Poetry #6

GO AHEAD

Tabitha LeAnn
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 50
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2003-05-06 11:36 PM

GO AHEAD AND TEAR ME APART
CONTINUE TO CAUSE THIS ABUSE UPON MY HEART
GO AHEAD AND MAKE ME CRY
GO ON MAKING ME WANT TO DIE
CONTINUE TO GIVE ME REGRETS
GO ON MAKING YOUR SILENT THREATS
GO AHEAD AND REMIND ME OF THE REASONS I SHOULD LEAVE
GO AHEAD AND WARN ME IF I DO WE BOTH WILL GREAVE
CONTINUE TO TELL ME ALL WE HAVE IS IN MY HEAD
GO AHEAD AND LEAVE ME WONDERING IF WELL BE TOGETHER BEFORE IM DEAD

Barbara
Junior Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 32

1 posted 2003-05-07 06:50 AM

oh.... thats a very good poem.. its like pushing someone to tell you something bad, so you can go...

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

2 posted 2003-05-07 10:49 AM

Well you seem to be in pain, I hope it all goes your way

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-05-07 11:59 AM

This is really good. I think there are a couple spots where the timing is off, but other than that it's really good!
Jen

To hate you must first have loved.

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