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Teen Poetry #6

you guess.........

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

0 posted 2002-10-08 11:24 AM

         Kurt you came late.
         I almost chickened out.
         Gen got scared of the wildboar
         that was hitting on her

         It didnt hurt much...

         It was over before it began.

         I know you're a pro...

         Im glad I did it.

* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me using the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-10-09 03:27 PM

This is very vague... I don't know what to make of it, exactly. The vagueness of this piece is really enhanced by the fact that you kept it brief, and used a lot of pronouns like "it."

Nice work. I'll come back to this a few times to see if I can interperet it a bit more, maybe I can figure out what it refers to...

Or maybe someone will reply in this thread calling me a fool... hehe... whichever.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-10-09 07:59 PM

Parasite: You fool!!! ( hehe i had to say that cause he said....yea.....go Riley

)

Great poem...loved it!

~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2002-10-09 11:24 PM

Did ya'all get tattoos?
Maybe went bull-riding?
Hmmm... interesting.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

4 posted 2002-10-17 09:46 AM

actually i got my navel pierced, i just went and did it for myself, i guess i wanted to prove to myself i can do it

* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me using the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher

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