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blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

0 posted 2003-05-03 07:17 PM

Once more love, I hoped, then fell
Once again worked perfect spell
Mixed it up well in the pot
A ruined mess yet ever got
Time again I read this rhyme
Fell again for man's sweet line
Loved and left
Alone once more
As on bare ground
Heart's brew doth pour

Once again write counter-curse
Escaping solely by my verse
What shall I try this time around?
If you looked, could I be found?
I disappear into the night
Hide in darkness, blend in light
You were mine
Or so I thought
You walk away
I can't be caught

Silence surrounds, it screams and cries
As that part lays down and dies
A lonely teardrop has no end
To sea, to storm, to tear again
I love the man you left behind
Live in my heart 'til end of time
You'll never find me
Never see
The woman I
Once tried to be

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

1 posted 2003-05-03 10:42 PM

this is one of the best things i've read in a while. it has my vote.
Jenni

To hate you must first have loved.

vashthestampede
New Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 9

2 posted 2003-05-03 10:49 PM

I think it was the best I read before. It was wonderful!!!

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

3 posted 2003-05-06 06:09 PM

Alas, the frustration!

Well done!

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

4 posted 2003-05-18 03:21 PM

amazing. I love your stuff so much!!! I look for your username all the time, but I realized I'd missed this one so I read it and of course I loved it!!! I especially like this:

"I disappear into the night
Hide in darkness, blend in light
You were mine"

It's so good! Keep writing, I wanna keep reading!!

-cassi

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

5 posted 2003-05-18 08:02 PM

Wow... thanks.

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

6 posted 2003-05-18 08:05 PM

great poem... i like this a lot

"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives"

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