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Teen Poetry #6

It's all because of you

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

0 posted 2003-05-02 05:20 PM

It's all because of you,
It's that something in your eyes.
It pulls me close to my surprize,
I don't know what to say or do
because now my freinds hate me to.

It's all because of you,
that i melt to your feet.
It's a feeling i just cannot beat.
As my once so close friends give me scorns of hate.
I love you, i do!
But do you love me too?

It's all because of you,
that i'm loosing my closest friends,
The ones that said they'd be there tilll the very end.
But I love you, I do.

It's all because of you,
That they hate me.
But can't they see?
We're all the same
And i love you to much to lose you.

It's all because of you,
That I don't know what to do.

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

1 posted 2003-05-03 09:48 AM

ya it sucks don't it!

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-05-03 06:44 PM

The feeling that made you write that... yeah, it sucks.

But the poem itself... I liked it. Needs some finishing and editing and polishing up, but not bad at all!

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-05-03 10:37 PM

hey gurl, this ones about derek right? I like the poem but it does need some polishing. luv yas,
Jen

To hate you must first have loved.

lingering thoughts
Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

4 posted 2003-05-03 11:07 PM

the poem was good!
my friend is in the same situation ,with so many people not supporting her it can be very hard ..

*Cassandra

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