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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Talking of this and that. You stand in front of the auotomatic door, it opens for you..it doesn't decide, it doesn't want to. Programing. Electronics..fasinating, I guess. We can't understand our brains because we are our brains. Thinking about why we think. We need superiority.. or something to satisfy this curiosity. Were victims of ourselves. Soft machinary, nuts and bolts. Rusted and old. Forgotton inventions. Do we feel anything at all.. or is it just chemicals..in our brain. Reacting. Distracted.. I'm all over the place lately. My heads here, my hearts there. This and that.. Prolonged wakefulness.. Caffine makes me jittery. I'm so tired.. this is my last drop, my last tear. My finial reaction. |
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Obsolete Junior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 43 |
Brilliant. |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
that was really good. and thanks for ur reply. actually, i like my poems to be dark and disturbing. *lol* but my friend was complaining *jokingly* about it and we decided to mess around and write that poem. my other ones seem to be more...truthful and i sually write through my experinces. not happy like that. that was too happy for me. *lol* sorry for rambling. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
thank you! no one has ever called my poetry brillant, I take it as a major compliment. ~Lex...  |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
 Absolutely amazing. This is one of the most unique ones I've read in a LONG time. Bravo!~Kay Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me. |
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