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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2003-04-29 09:21 PM



How many more days
the calendar fading
the time is almost here
unfortunate
it's no big deal
playing this vanishing game
give me a month, you won't even remember
you won't find me
won't be around
slow and shaky
I lost the race
hair standing on end
it's not time yet
comtemplating
the wishes are gone
how sad
so many years wasted
ain't that grand
so many dreams
gone....


Regina Levy 2003

"Despite all my rage I am still just a rat in a cage, Then someone will say what is lost can never be saved"
-Smashing Pumpkins

© Copyright 2003 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
1 posted 2003-04-30 04:58 PM


ok...I must be feeling stupid today because I didn't quite get what you were trying to say...although the doscile nature of the poem did pleasure my mind...good poem, I'm just an idiot today.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

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